320. Evening, May 31, 1935
Without speaking, they sat
On the porch.
Got no crickets no more,
Riah thought. Likely drought
Had killed them all.
Seemed there should be
Crickets: or the stitch, stitch,
Stitch of the cicadas for
A lullaby, this soothing,
Drowsing night.
Riah mused on this,
With half-shut eyes.
Cool air, heat
Drained from it by the dark,
Crept the steps
And ruffled Thomas’ hair.
James breathed deeply, sleeping
On the quilt.
From the corner of her
Eye, she caught Tom
Smile down, lay his hand
Along James’ head.
Nothing need be said.
They’d planted,
It had rained, and
They must wait. Dozing,
Floating on the evening,
On the breeze….
I’ll tell Tom tomorrow,
Riah thought.
She had heard in town
The Committee seat
Had gone to Alvin Tucker.
He had acres, hundreds,
North in county. So
It had gone to him, and
Not to Tom.
Too, Riah heard from
Miss Flynn, she knew
Where Louise was headed,
And could get her in
A nursing school–
If she wanted, Miss Flynn
Could pull strings.
Well, that Committee seat.
Tom wanted that. But
Such a lovely evening
Now. Next day
Will be lots of time
To tell.
Morning’s soon enough,
Tom thought.
Not tonight–
She’s got plenty woes.
No need fretting
Mortgage troubles too.
Letter said they’d call us
For a “hearing.”
They don’t like us
Paying for the farm,
And on Relief.
I can see,
Although….
Though,
The news can sure wait
Till tomorrow.
Thomas on the porch
Began to whistle.
One of the old songs,
Content, and slow.
Joining in the stream,
She hummed along.
A moth grazed James’ cheek.
Murmuring, he flipflopped
On his back.
He laughed softly, smiling
In a dream.
They leaned toward
James, tune carrying them,
Still.
Wordless, their eyes met
Above the quilt.
THE END
August 24, 2010 at 1:20 pm |
You write beautifully. I haven’t caught all the episodes, but will slowly make my way through the entire story. It’s really worth it.
September 4, 2010 at 11:52 am |
I love the secrets they each keep, and the “stitch, stitch, stitch” of cicadas.
September 5, 2010 at 1:43 am |
Mary Lee,
Answered on the Welcome Page–thanks.
September 25, 2010 at 2:38 pm |
This one is quiet, but that’s its strength. Love it!
September 26, 2010 at 12:54 am |
Hi Diane,
My day was a little melancholy, so your comment came at the perfect time. I want to think on it and will respond on the Welcome Page probably Friday. Thank you, and I like your current post!
November 21, 2010 at 1:56 am |
Beautifully written, as always.
November 22, 2010 at 12:56 am |
Nicola,
What a lovely site you yourself have, and your comment was much appreciated. If it’s okay, I’ll respond on the Welcome Page after the Thanksgiving rush is over.
Grad, in looking back over the comments here, I’m pretty sure (I hope) I responded to yours from August long ago on the Welcome Page.
November 30, 2010 at 2:36 pm |
I was thinking about Rain: A Dust Bowl Story on a recent road trip (I think this would a good candidate for audio format). Suddenly, the word “Screenplay” came to mind. Have you ever thought of that?
December 3, 2010 at 3:15 am |
My one-word response on the Welcome Page….
December 27, 2010 at 4:03 pm |
Merry Christmas to you too, Shelley. You are such a beautiful writer and give the gift of joy every time I log on to your blog. May you keep the beauty coming.
January 2, 2011 at 1:41 am |
Great to see you again, Mirella. Response on the Welcome Page.
April 19, 2012 at 12:42 am |
Hope you are writing that screenplay. Do you have another blog? You’re a super writer.
April 23, 2012 at 11:47 pm |
Grad,
Delighted to hear from you, and will respond more thoroughly in about a week over on the Welcome page! I’ll move your comment there then. Thanks again for it….
June 14, 2012 at 8:17 am |
Isn’t this The Grapes of Wrath retold?
June 14, 2012 at 10:55 pm |
Hi Thomas, I’ll respond on the Welcome Page so others can consider your question.
December 1, 2012 at 6:55 am |
what a gem of a blog!
December 24, 2012 at 6:07 pm |
Waffle-Wednesday: Liesl, I respond on the Welcome page.